Thats one evil looking detective ….. I can’t think of anything more clever to say ….
Dave’s lookin’ sinister because he knows something Dornail doesn’t. MUA HA HA HA HA!
Dave knows something Dornail doesn’t?
Let me guess – Dave is not left handed?
I imagine it’s something about which direction Dave’s female power-house of a partner swings.
“I have no nostrils! Does that frighten you?”
On top of that he’s lighting that cigarette and you just KNOW he’s burning the bottom of his cube nose!! Dave has more skills than you think! That nose is so huge.. cause it’s full of mystery!! (actually I love dave’s odd looks. he’s a fucking BLAST to draw!)
He’s gonna put an eye out with that curly cue hair! That frame should be in 3D!!!
One of my major failings is my lack of use of bleed! (ya know where the image runs right off the page). I should do that more! That said, Dave is loaded with awesome design elements, but I’m having the most fun with that curly cue. LOL. Framing Dornail in it in panel 1 was a last second inspiration on the page.
I love that Rodney is busy throwing a car.
He and Miko’s fight has slowly escalated! If you noticed on the previous page it was just a hunk of pavement. Now motorcycles and cars!!
Panel 5 is gonna be my forum avatar somewhere. It must happen.
I hope it’s your Avatar in that movie.. Avatar. Can you see dave running around with the space indians? Falling in love? His hair curly in glorious 3d?
this page could use more boobs
I used to take your guff, but seeing as how Mallville has such a busty beauty as Dr. Jiggs yet we have yet to have one shower scene battle… teenagers with raging hormones yet no irresponsible under age sex (and there’s even someone with stretchy abilities!!! COME ON!)…. I can no longer take your guff MISTER!
In short .. GIMME MORE MALLVILLE SMUT, PUNK!
So Dornail has enough energy left in him to talk and analyze, but not to stand up?
He’s probably enjoying the ground in an impure way.
Ugh, but then again, this is Dornail we are talking about
Mother Earth is one hell of a MILF!
Oh man!! ha ha ha. YES! COMMENT OF THE DAY ON ANY WEBPAGE ON THE INTERNET!
He is sick. Sick enough to fuck an anthill. (there’s a queen in there ya know!)
BWA HA HA HA HA! Yessss . YEESSSSSS! Actually in the original script Rodney was making a joke about Dornail having found an ant hill. Like.. double joke bonus because dornail’s pervy enough to fuck an ant hill but also has a small weenie. I scrapped it instead for the “is your butt growing or am I shrinking?” joke. But now I kinda wish I’d gone the original way. LOL
He also had enough energy for a cock push up. If you ever tried one of those that’s pretty tremendous!!! So… I’d seriously question just how down and out he really is. LOL Or perhaps his down and out is not quite like ours.
Damn cliffhangers! I hate them! Anyway, I hope Dave likes being ripped apart by a Undead Demon Bitch!
Keen insight! Does mere possession of the PIPOD mean possession of it’s possessor? VEDDY INTERSTINK!! Also good news on this cliffhanger.. you don’t to wait long. Dave spills the beans next page! now that the kickstarter’s in full effect I can dig into dojo updates a bit harder! So look for it a.s.a.p.!
I feel a little bit like a dumbass, maybe cuz English ain’t my main language and I can’t figure out this subtle mind game (or it’s so obvious I can’t see it), but what does Dornail actually mean in Panel 4? The part of unnattached snatch and being skeezier, I can’t figure out the relation between these things, haha
I think its cause the detective saying that he and Miko aren’t an item … as a sort of bribe to doornail, who’s just saying he sees right through that.
Could be wrong, a delightful chap who draws crude comics will probably be along eventually to give a proper answer.
Ah! Allow me to clarify! This whole 2 page sequence (this page and the one before it) was merely Dave and Dornail having a bit of a detective’s duel! So it was all about trying to one up each other on deductions. But Dornail loaded the beginning of his deduction (panel 2) with a trap to find out if Dave and Miko were in a relationship. Not really having any way to retort to Dornail’s accusation that he’s either the killer or a poor detective, Dave fires back that he and Miko aren’t in a relationship (we can assume this is somewhat frustration on Dave’s part as he probably wasn’t happy with Dornail’s accusations). Of course, this was just what Dornail wanted to hear as he finds hitting on single women less challenging. Does that clarify a bit? Dave is actually trying to be a bit diplomatic in this respect. He wants to just talk Dornail into handing over the pipod. Dornail’s being a dick here.
Now that’s a hell of an explanation. Guess I am just not used to seeing detective duels in comics or… hell, anywhere. This ought to be my first, perhaps. Well done.
last panel creepy and Dornail is pervy as always
Dornail’s joke is a variation on an earlier version of this joke where he said “Like a blind girl blow job-they never see it comin’” LOL. Also worth noting is that in Endless City Dave’s eyes aren’t such a heavily guarded secret. heh heh But I wanted to save them for special moments. LIKE NOW! when he’s super devious because he knows something Dornail doesn’t! Who truly won the detective’s duel ? We’ll find out soon!
Raven! I’m so happy to see your kick starter up, and of course you can bet your ass everyone I know that is into comics is going to hear about it! It really looks like you put a lot of effort into getting this ready, and I can’t wait to see some of your scenes (I.E. the mall spread) in print!!!
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