Great looking page, despite all the exposition!
Truth is always stranger than fiction! Especially Dornail’s fiction!
I was hoping for a little more dialogue in this one.
To much TEXT!!!
“Too” much text. Wrong form of the word.
Panel 3 cracks me up!
Also: Panel 4 Rodney headbutt NOOOO! Come back, Rodney!
And ol’Squarenose is quite the detective! He’s got Dornail figgered out.
Not even Rodney can survive and afro powered headbutt!
But that strategy worked so well for Will Smith in MIB3…
At this point if you find this kind of page challenging I’m assuming you’re a first time reader. Welcome! Thanks for joining us. Raven’s Dojo is written as a comic BOOK not a comic STRIP. The distinction is important. A strip’s goal is to be amusing in a concise fashion. Brevity is the soul of wit (etc). I’m telling you a story. While I aim to amuse my goal is also to tell a tale. One of my goals is clarity. So I use words as needed. There are pages (like this one) where necessity requires more dialogue. Then there will be pages with no words at all! I’m aware a text heavy comic experience can be a challenge so while my writing style leans towards the verbose (Due to my preference for wordplay) I try to keep things from becoming a slog. That said , this page is composed of 3 panels of jokes. 1 panel of plot progression. And a panel of exposition necessary since the information (while redundant to long time readers) hasn’t been mentioned once in this entire 2 issue arc. This is less than 2 minutes of reading. You can do it! I have faith in you!
Or to be concise…. This page IS wordy. It needed to be in most places since this is a comic BOOK not STRIP. Dont’ worry. Other pages won’t be. Read on and enjoy. Thanks!
If they didn’t bother reading the text in the comic, while would they bother to read the text in your comment?
Words are our friends! Use them! I love the panel in the middle!
Dornail looks like a Hungry Hungry Hippo in panel 2.
I have issues with people who get uppity when it’s a wordy page, but I’ll keep them to myself to preserve the spirit of peace and perversion that abides here.
Are we ever getting a flashback to the Rodney/Nina thing? Because I’d like to know exactly what Dornail’s SUCCESSFULL come ons are that convinces human ladies to sleep with a DRAGON.
It involves threats of village burning and offers of maiden sacrifices
Dornail getting lucky! that must be a lie
Silk & Honey
Menage A 3
The Rock Cocks
Ruins of Hesh'imet
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